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Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Overall I think the feedback I've been receiving has mostly been helpful. I think sometimes it's too positive and doesn't give me enough direction to improve my writing.

I think I've been pretty good at giving feedback to others, I always try to provide at least two suggestions or ask two questions unless I see no room for improvement.

The comments have been a really fun way to connect with people - there are two or three blogs that I go visit every week now.

I think I like the way my comment wall and introduction post are now - I may adjust my comment wall after I post my first story but otherwise I think I'll leave it.

I really appreciate this graphic for showing the mindset you should be in when giving feedback rather than just explaining the act of giving feedback. Source.

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