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Week 12 Lab

For this week's Story Lab, I read chapter two from EmpoWord. Here are some loose notes I took over it:

  • Rather than telling a story purely linearly, including each detail, you should limit your scope to make sure you keep your reader engaged
  • Make sure the details all reflect the bigger picture and that you keep in mind what you're representing
  • You can start your story in medias, or in the middle of the action, rather than spending time on exposition
  • I don't have any notes on the POV portion except that I'm very excited to see Dear White People used as an example
  • The one note I do have is that stream-of-consciousness is listed as a POV, which I think is interesting and it'd be fun to write a story from that perspective.
  • Covered some good points about dialogue and how mediums change the limits of the story you can tell

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